VIETNAM NATIONAL UNIVERSITY Hanoi University of languages and international studies Department of postgraduate studies ---------- NGUYEN THI LOI THE USE OF PRE-WRITING ACTIVITIES TO IMPROVE WRITING SKILLS FOR 11TH FORM STUDENTS AT TIEN DU 3 HIGH SCHOOL, BAC NINH – AN ACTION RESEARCH (Sö DôNG MéT Sè HO¹T §éng tr-íc khi viÕt nh»m ph¸t triÓn kü n¨ng viÕt cho häc sinh líp 11 t¹i tr-êng thpt tiªn du sè 3 tØnh b¾c ninh – mét nghiªn cøu hµnh ®éng) MA MINOR THESIS FIELD: ENGLISH METHODOLOGY CODE: 60 14 10 HANOI, 2009 LUAN VAN CHAT LUONG download : add luanvanchat@agmail.com VIETNAM NATIONAL UNIVERSITY HANOI UNIVERSITY OF LANGUAGES AND INTERNATIONAL STUDIES Department of Postgraduate Studies ……………. NGUYEN THI LOI THE USE OF PRE-WRITING ACTIVITIES TO IMPROVE WRITING SKILLS FOR 11TH FORM STUDENTS AT TIEN DU 3 HIGH SCHOOL, BAC NINH – AN ACTION RESEARCH (Sö DôNG MéT Sè HO¹T §éng tr-íc khi viÕt nh»m ph¸t triÓn kü n¨ng viÕt cho häc sinh líp 11 t¹i tr-êng thpt tiªn du sè 3 tØnh b¾c ninh – mét nghiªn cøu hµnh ®éng) MA MINOR THESIS FIELD: ENGLISH METHODOLOGY CODE: 60 14 10 SUPERVISOR: PHAN THI VAN QUYEN, MA HANOI, 2009 LUAN VAN CHAT LUONG download : add luanvanchat@agmail.com v TABLE OF CONTENTS Declaration ………………………………………………………………………… i Acknowledgements………………………………………………………………… ii Abstract……………………………………………………………………………. iii List of Tables and Charts…………………………………………………………… iv Table of contents…………………………………………………………………… v CHAPTER ONE: INTRODUCTION 1. Statement of problems ……………………………………………………….
Aims and research questions of the study …………………………………… 2 1. Aims of the study …. Research questions of the study …………………………………………… 2 1. Methods of the study ………………………………………………………… 2 1.
Significance of the study …. Design of the study…………………………………………………………… 3 CHAPTER TWO: LITERATURE REVIEW 2. Theoretical background of writing …………………………………………. Definition of writing ………………………………………………….
Types of writing. Why do students need to write? ………………………………………… 5 2. Factors affecting written communication………………………………. The product of writing …………………………………………….
Pre-writing stage and pre-writing activities …. Pre-writing stage ………………………………………………. Some common pre-writing activities …………………………………. Benefits of pre-writing activities ……………………………………….
14 LUAN VAN CHAT LUONG download : add luanvanchat@agmail. A warning about pre-writing activities ………………………………… 15 CHAPTER THREE: METHODOLOGY 3. Overview of action research …………………………………………………… 16 3. Descriptions of the research …………………………………………………… 16 3.
Description of the participants of the study ……………………………. Planning-identifying the current problems and the causes of the problem s 18 3. Pre-test instrument ……………………………………………… 18 3. Action, developing an action plan and conducting the experiment …….
Observation, collecting data and observing the effects of the action …… 22 3. Reflection, evaluating the action plan and the evaluated effects of the action 23 3. Data collection instruments and their procedures ………………………. 23 CHAPTER FOUR: DATA ANALYSIS AND DISCUSSION 4.1: Data analysis procedures …….
The results of the pre-test and post-test ………………………………………. The results of the students’ pre- and post-attitudinal survey ………………….1: The students’ attitude towards writing …………………………………… 27 4. The problems that cause the difficulties in students’ writing ……………. The students’ preferences for participating in the pre-writing activities … 30 4.
The students’ assessment of some pre-writing activities ………………… 31 4. The role of pre-writing activities to the improvement of students’ writing. 34 LUAN VAN CHAT LUONG download : add luanvanchat@agmail. The students’ comments on the pre-writing activities implemented …………… 35 4.
37 CHAPTER FIVE: CONCLUSION 5. Limitations of the study and recommendations for further research …………. 41 REFERENCES APPENDICES Appendix 1: Schedule for writing lessons of the second term ……………………. I Appendix 2: Questionnaires for students before and after the action plan ……….
III Appendix 3: Tests …………………………………………………………………. Post-test ……………………………………………… VI Appendix 4: Results of the Pre- and Post-tests …. VII Appendix 5: Results of the Pre- and Post-study survey questionnaires …………. VIII Appendix 6: Sample lesson plan for applying pre-writing activities in class ……… X LUAN VAN CHAT LUONG download : add luanvanchat@agmail.com 1 Chapter 1: Introduction 1.Statement of problems.
It is undeniable that English is the international medium of communication in the fields of science, technology, culture, education, economy, politic and so on. It is also considered a means to promote mutual understanding and cooperation between Vietnam and other countries in the world. Since Vietnam officially joined WTO, the importance of English has been recognized more and more widely. For its role, English has been not only a compulsory subject in almost all high schools in Vietnam but one of the three major subjects in the high school final examination and in the entrance exam to some universities and colleges as well.
Together with the development of English, there are many changes in the curriculum for high school students. In the past, the contents in the textbook mainly focused on grammar, reading and speaking. Listening and writing in contexts were almost neglected. Students could practice listening skill only by listening to their teachers.
They rarely had a chance to listen to foreigners or listen in situations. Their writing skill was even worse. Although they were very good at doing exercises in structural forms, they could hardly write a topic in class. Only when the new set of textbooks is used, students have more chances to learn writing skill.
To students in the school where I am teaching, writing seems to be the most difficult skill. Many of them see writing lessons as times of sighing, pencil – chewing, foot – shuffling agony. Some students even state that “Oh, I’ve no ideas”, “My palms are sweating, my heart is beating fast, and my mind is blocked”, “It’s not easy to get it started at all”. Why is it that for large numbers of high school students, writing seems to be a great problem? As a teacher, I have thought a lot about this question.
There are many things that one can do to aid in the writing process such as using visual aids, using multi-media, etc. Among the three stages of a writing lesson: pre-writing, while-writing and post-writing, I think pre- writing is considered the most important one. It helps students to get starting to write easily. It is the key in the development of a “good” essay and the “evolution” of good writing skills.
The above reason has encouraged me to investigate into different pre-writing activities. I would like to do something with the hope of improving writing skill for our students at Tien LUAN VAN CHAT LUONG download : add luanvanchat@agmail.com 2 Du 3 High School. Therefore, the thesis title goes as “The Use of Pre-writing Activities to Improve Writing Skills for 11th form students at Tien Du 3 High School, Bac Ninh – An Action Research”. Hopefully, the activities introduced in this study will be of some help for the author and other teachers in writing lessons.
Aims and research questions of the study. Aims of the study. The purposes of this study are to investigate the causes of the difficulties which 11th form students at Tien Du 3 high school encounter in learning writing and to investigate the effectiveness of some pre-writing activities employed with a view to improving students’ writing. To achieve the above purposes, the study has to follow the steps below: - To investigate the causes of the difficulties in writing lessons from classroom observation and classroom interaction.
- To devise some pre-writing activities and use them in writing lessons to solve the problem. - To examine the effectiveness of these activities to decide whether they are helpful or not. Research questions of the study. This study explores the use of different pre-writing activities for 11th form students in Tien Du 3 High School.
The weaknesses in writing skills of those students have encouraged the researcher to investigate these activities in the light of the following questions: 1- What are the causes of difficulties in students’ writing? 2- How do the pre-writing activities affect 11th form students in Tien Du 3 High School in their writing? 1. Methods of the study. The study was carried out using action research method. The data were collected from survey questionnaires, class observation and interviews with students.
Questionnaires are designed as a means to make the researcher’s evaluation more objective. The questionnaires are given to eleventh form students of Tien Du 3 High School to find out their evaluation on LUAN VAN CHAT LUONG download : add luanvanchat@agmail.com 3 the pre-writing activities implemented as well as their comments and suggestions for these activities. Significance of the study. The study highlights the importance of pre-writing stage in the process of a writing lesson.
It may also provide some useful ideas for teachers and help them implement the activities in the pre-writing stage more effectively. Finally yet importantly, the author of the study hopes that the suggested pre-writing activities can help students improve their writing skill in class. Design of the study. The study consists of five chapters: Chapter 1: Introduction; Chapter 2: Literature Review; Chapter 3: Methodology; Chater 4: Data Analysis; Chapter 5: Suggestion and conclusion.
Chapter 1, the introduction, presents the background to the study and statement of the problem, the aims, significance and design of the study. It also expresses the author’s reasons for choosing the method to fulfill the study. Chapter two, Literature Review, presents the main concepts relevant to the research topic such as different points of views about writing, definition of pre-writing, the importance of the pre-writing stage in a writing lesson, etc. Chapter three presents the methodology used in the study.
The researcher attempts to improve students’ writing practice in classroom. Therefore, the methodology employed in this study is action research. Chapter 4 provides detailed results of the survey questionnaires and class observation. The students’ comments are also given in this chapter.
The comprehensive analysis on the data collected is supplied in details in this part. The last chapter of this study, chapter 5, offers some major findings of using pre- writing activities in class. It also gives a “Conclusion” to the study, which emphasizes the key issues in the study, points out the limitations and provides some suggestions for the further study. LUAN VAN CHAT LUONG download : add luanvanchat@agmail.com 4 Chapter 2: Literature review 2.
To provide a theoretical background to the study, this chapter is devoted to the review of concepts most relevant to the thesis’s topic. These are the theoretical background of writing, the stages of a writing lesson, and the factors affecting teaching and learning writing. Theoretical background of writing. It is important to identify the skills involved in written communication to devise effective activities to teach writing.
To identify the skills we need to know what writing actually involves. Hence the following parts review the different definitions of writing, the processes involved in writing and the factors that affect written communication. Definition of writing. What writing is and how it is developed has been a subject of discussion and debate for centuries, from the time of Aristotle, Cicero, etc.
Through there are different viewpoints, it is commonly agreed that writing is far from being a simple matter of transcribing language into written symbols: it is a thinking process in its own right. It demands conscious intellectual effort, which usually has to be sustained over a considerable period of time. Given below are some of the views of various writers on the definition of writing. In “The world’s writing systems”, Daniels (1996, p3) defines writing as “A system of more or less permanent marks used to represent an utterance in such a way that it can be recovered more or less exactly without the intervention of the utterer”.
According to Donn Byrne, “Writing involves the encoding of a message of some kind: that is, we translate our thoughts into language”. It is obvious that when we write, we use graphic symbols: that is, letters or combinations of letters which relate to the sounds we make when we speak. On one level, writing can be said to be the act of forming these symbols: making marks on a flat surface of some kind. But writing is clearly much more than the production of sounds.