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In conclusion, various measures can be taken to [äHẽ thế | Kết bài bằng một câu ngắn gọn problems that are certain to arise as the populations of countries grow older. Cau thứ 2 phần mở bài luôn được viết để trả lời gián tiếp câu hỏi. Không nên viết 1 dàn bài ngay tại mở bài. + Một số từ và cấu trúc hay dùng trong dạng bài này: 1.
Some negative consequences To take steps to mitigate these potential problems wn Several related problems can be anticipated The main issue is epneawrp Solve the problems described above Asimple solution Asecond measure Tackle the problems 21 | http//zim.vn ANH NGỮ ZIM | Room 2501, Ocean Group Building, 19 Nguyen Trai St, Thanh Xuan Dist, Hanoi, Vietnam ZIM ACADEMY PHAN 5: DANG BAI TWO-PART QUESTION Dạng bài này yêu cầu người viết phải trả lời 2 câu hỏi trực tiếp từ để bài. Cấu trúc của đoạn thân bài khác đơn giản, mỗi đoạn sẽ trả lời một câu: Ví dụ: Happiness is considered very important in life. Why is it difficult to define ? What factors are important in achieving happiness? It is no doubt true that the majority of people would like to be happy in their lives. While the personal nature of happiness makes it difficult to describe, there do seem to be some common needs that we all share with regard to experiencing or achieving happiness.
Happiness is difficult to define because it means something different to each individual person. Nobody can fully understand or experience another person's feelings, and we all have our own particular passions from which we take pleasure. Some people, for example, derive a sense of satisfaction from earning money or achieving success, whereas for others, health and family are much more important. At the same time, a range of other feelings, from excitement to peacefulness, may be associated with the idea of happiness, and the same person may therefore feel happy in a variety of different ways.
=> trả lời câu hỏi thứ nhất Although it seems almost impossible to give a precise definition of happiness, most people would agree that there are some basic preconditions to achieving it. Firstly, it is hard for a person to be happy if he or she does not have a safe place to live and enough food to eat. Our basic survival needs must surely be met before we can lead a pleasant life. Secondly, the greatest joy in life is usually found in shared experiences with family and friends, and it is rare to find a person who is content to live in complete isolation.
Other key factors could be individual freedom and a sense of purpose in life. => trả lời câu hỏi thứ hai In conclusion, happiness is difficult to define because it is particular to each individual, but | believe that our basic needs for shelter, food and company need to be fulfilled before we can experience it.vn ANH NGỮ ZIM | Room 2501, Ocean Group Building, 19 Nguyen Trai St, Thanh Xuan Dist, Hanoi, Vietnam PHẦN 6: TỔNG HỢP CÁC BÀI MẪU CỦA CỰU GIẢM KHẢO SIMON (UPDATE 10/5/2016) >_32 bài mẫu gồm: >_ 15 bài mẫu dạng Opinion >_9 bài mẫu dạng Discussion >_ 2 bài mẫu dạng Cause/problem & solution >_ 6 bài mẫu dạng Two-part question + Cách tự học với việc đọc bài mẫu: Gồm 3 bước sau: 1. Viết ra dàn bài, idea mà thầy Simon sử dụng với từng đề bài 2. Note lại những từ và cụm từ hay, tra từ điển Oxford để biết chính xác cách dùng 3.
Tự viết lại bài của mình và sử dụng những cấu trúc chung, từ và cụm từ vừa được note lại.vn ANH NGỮ ZIM | Room 2501, Ocean Group Building, 19 Nguyen Trai St, Thanh Xuan Dist, Hanoi, Vietnam ZIM ACADEMY OPINION (15 sample essays) Topic 1: As well as making money, businesses also have social responsibilities. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Businesses have always sought to make a profit, but it is becoming increasingly common to hear people talk about the điểãïGiiigstöiE that companies have. | completely agree with the idea that businesses should do more for society than simply make money. On the one hand, | accept that businesses must make money in order to survive in ẩ Competitive World.
It seems logical that the priority of any company should be to cover its running costs, such as employees’ wages and ayia RoMBUilaineS aiid UfilifES. On top of these costs, companies also need to invest in improvements and innovations if they wish to remain successful. If a company is unable to pay its bills or any concerns about become irrelevant. In other words, a company can only make a positive contribution to society if it is On the other hand, companies should not be run with fhe sole aim of maximising profit; they have a wider role to play in society.
One social obligation that owners and managers have is to treat their employees well, rather than exploiting them. For example, they could pay a “living wage” to ensure that workers have a good quality of life. | also like the idea that businesses could use a proportion of their profits to support local charities, environmental projects or Finally, instead of trying to by using accounting loopholes, | believe that company bosses should be happy to contribute to society through the tax system. In conclusion, I believe that companies should place as much importance on their social responsibilities as they do on their financial objectives.
(285 words, band 9) % Useful vocabulary: Social obligations: những ràng buộc xã hội yore A competitive world: một thế giới đầy sự cạnh tranh Meet the changing needs of customers= satisfy customers’ changing needs: đáp ứng nhu cầu luôn thay đổi từ khách hàng Social responsibilities: các trách nhiệm đối với xã hội ye In good financial health: tình hình tài chính ổn định. The sole aim of maximizing profit: chỉ với mục đích tối đa hóa lợi nhuận 24 htlp//zim vn ANH NGỮ ZIM | Room 2501, Ocean Group Building, 19 Nguyen Trai St, Thanh Xuan Dist, Hanoi, Vietnam ZIM ACADEMY Topic 2: Although more and more people read news on the Internet, newspapers will remain the most important source of news. Do you agree or disagree? The Internet is beginning to rival newspapers as the best place to find information about what is happening in the world. | believe that this trend will continue, and the Internet will soon be just as important as the traditional press.
On the one hand, | believe that newspapers will continue to be &/Wital Source! Of information, even in the Intemet age. Firstly, newspapers are the most traditional means of communicating the news, and not everyone wants to or is able to use the Internet instead. For example, old people or those in rural areas might not have the ability or opportunity to get online, while many of us simply prefer newspapers even if we do have Internet access. Secondly, newspapers can be trusted as reliable sources of news because they employ professional journalists and editors.
Finally, many people like the experience of holding and reading a paper rather than looking at a computer screen. However, the Internet is likely to become just as popular as newspapers for a variety of reasons. The main reason is that it allows us much to news in real time and wherever we are, on different gadgets and mobile devices. Another key benefit of online news compared to newspapers is the ability to share articles, discuss them with other people, give our views, and even contribute with our own updates on socal media: For example, there has been Bläff6ffS like Twitter and YouTube where anyone can share their news and views.
A final point is that this source of news is less damaging to the environment. In conclusion, | disagree with the view that newspapers will continue to be the main source of news, because | believe that the Internet will soon be equally important. The traditional press: bao chí truyền thống 2. Avital source of information: mét nguén théng tin quan trong 3.
The Internet age: thời đại Internet 4. Social media: truyén thong ‘An explosion in the use of platforms: sự bùng nổ trong việc sử dụng những ứng dụng 25 htp//zim vn ANH NGỮ ZIM | Room 2501, Ocean Group Building, 19 Nguyen Trai St, Thanh Xuan Dist, Hanoi, Vietnam ZIM ACADEMY Topic 3: In some countries, many more people are choosing to live alone nowadays than in the past. Do you think this is a positive or negative development? In recent years, it has become far more normal for people to live alone, particularly in large cities in the developed world. In my opinion, this trend could have both positive and negative consequences in equal measure.
The rise in can be seen as positive for both personal and broader economic reason: people who choose to live alone may become more independent and self-reliant than those who live with family members. A young adult who lives alone, for example, will need to learn to cook, clean, pay bills and manage his or her budget, all of which are valuable life skills; an increase in the number of such individuals can certainly be seen as a positive decor the trend towards living alone will result in This is likely to benefit | ÍÑđUSWW, estate agents and a whole host of other companies that rely on homeowners to buy their products or services. However, the personal and economic arguments given above can be considered from the opposite angle. Firstly, rather than the positive feeling of increased independence, people who live alone may experience iolation andl.
They miss out on the and dally conversation that family or flatmates can provide, and they must bear the weight of all household bills and responsibilities; in this sense, perhaps the trend towards living alone is a negative one. Secondly, from the financial point of view, a rise in demand for housing is likely to push up property prices and rents. While this may benefit some businesses, the general population, including those who live alone, will be faced with rising living costs. In conclusion, the increase in one-person households will have both beneficial and detrimental effects on individuals and on the economy.
(306 words-band 9) “Useful vocabulary: One-person households: những hộ gia đình có một người nmewhwrm From an economic perspective: theo góc độ kinh tế 'Greater demand for housing: nhu cầu lớn hơn về nhà ở. The construction industry: nganh xay dung Feelings of loneliness, isolation and worry: cam giác cô đơn, xa lánh và lo lắng. Emotional support: ủng hộ về mặt tình cảm 26 http://zim.vn ANH NGỮ ZIM | Room 2501, Ocean Group Building, 19 Nguyen Trai St, Thanh Xuan Dist, Hanoi, Vietnam ZIM ACADEMY Topic 4: Some people who have been in prison become good citizens later, and it is often argued that these are the best people to talk to teenagers about the dangers of committing a crime. To what extent do you agree or disagree?